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Posted by Steve Sweeney on Wednesday, September 2, 2020 6:12 PM

charlie hebdo
 

I agree.  Isn't advertising for commercial products (other than Kalmbach stuff)  strengst verboten? 

Why, yes. Yes it is. Locking thread. -SS

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Posted by Convicted One on Wednesday, September 2, 2020 2:14 PM

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and then watch the trees sway in the wind for 3 minutes until the train comes in view.

I've concluded that part of it is misspent ego.

eg: Here I am the cameraman, with my new go-pro camera, making a movie...isn't this great?

When he should instead be trying to put himself inside the head of the eventual audience.

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Posted by Convicted One on Wednesday, September 2, 2020 2:06 PM

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Too many YouTubers think we want to hear the horn or whistle blowing for a crossing a mile or more from the camera position and then watch the trees sway in the wind for 3 minutes until the train comes in view.

+1

You know, the odd thing is, about a year or so back, somebody posted a link to a youtube video made by some guy who stowed away on a freight traveling along one of the west coast mains.

People here seemed to obsess  over the legality issue, the safety issue, and the lack of common sense issues (all of which were valid complaints).....almost exclusively.

And while I would never try to encourage anyone to repeat such a stunt...the guy who made it seemed to know what he was doing. "For an amature".

The edits were mostly smooth, decent continuity, the subtexts informative yet concise an to the point. And the visuals were pretty decent too.

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Posted by tree68 on Wednesday, September 2, 2020 1:47 PM

BaltACD
Too many YouTubers think we want to hear the horn or whistle blowing for a crossing a mile or more from the camera position and then watch the trees sway in the wind for 3 minutes until the train comes in view.

Three minutes is a tad long, but that lead-in, before the train arrives, is a great time to insert the narrative without interupting the view of the train when it arrives.

Don't just show trains going by.  Tell a story.

And I think that's the message from just about everyone who has commented on this thread.

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Posted by BaltACD on Wednesday, September 2, 2020 1:42 PM

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One thing that I will give you credit for, at least you, unlike many other youtube contributors, do not have the preposterously long "lead-ins" where the train is approaching, yet out of view.

So many of these guys start their shoot with the train still out of sight, and just  let the video roll...leaving us sit and wait...and wait.....and wait. At first it might lead one to suspect the video is not running....until you notice tree branches blowing in the wind, or a bird fly by, or a car roll through on a side street, making the viewer wonder "where is the bleeping train?"....until like 20-45 seconds into the video, a train finally comes into vew.

Thank you for not putting us through that.  Movie

Too many YouTubers think we want to hear the horn or whistle blowing for a crossing a mile or more from the camera position and then watch the trees sway in the wind for 3 minutes until the train comes in view.

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Posted by Convicted One on Wednesday, September 2, 2020 12:47 PM

One thing that I will give you credit for, at least you, unlike many other youtube contributors, do not have the preposterously long "lead-ins" where the train is approaching, yet out of view.

So many of these guys start their shoot with the train still out of sight, and just  let the video roll...leaving us sit and wait...and wait.....and wait. At first it might lead one to suspect the video is not running....until you notice tree branches blowing in the wind, or a bird fly by, or a car roll through on a side street, making the viewer wonder "where is the bleeping train?"....until like 20-45 seconds into the video, a train finally comes into vew.

Thank you for not putting us through that.  Movie

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Posted by Convicted One on Wednesday, September 2, 2020 9:57 AM

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The dark scenes have been fixed all is well...

One thing that I really hope you will think about, is the net effect of your product.

"Why should anyone want to watch your videos"?

We can all watch trains "blow by", anywhere in the country. So,...watching a non-descript freight pass by in Timbuktu really isn't much different than watching one in Podunk. The net effect is pretty much the same.

But, you as the videographer have the opportunity to change that. You can change the "freight blowing by in Timbuktu" into a "trip TO Timbuktu  that included a train" for your viewer by including location specific content.  Make me feel like I've been there myself after watching your video.  

By providing the kind of content that Tree was mentioning, why is there only half a tower there propped up on stilts? Whose idea was that? When did it get  installed? maybe a still shot included of the tower before it was hacked up. 

And, superimposing text into your videostream is a good way to convey that type of info.

 

Just show some restraint. Too much of a good thing can get just as tedious as not enough.

When you do your job right, you'll leave the viewer feeling like he's "been there" after watching your video.

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Posted by ProRailProducions on Tuesday, September 1, 2020 7:57 PM

Convicted One

You've got those two segments where the screen is just black for an extended period,  along with that  little blip at the end with the white CSX hoppers, for no apparent reason. Your production skills appear to be in decline.  Maybe it's time to  give up on the free demo of your video editing software, and buy the "shrink wrap" version?

I can watch trains anywhere, but I'd have to travel to that location to see the tower better. Perhaps you could have focused a greater share of your time to the location specific items, and given more attention to the inside of the tower?

 

 

Our new video editor has been giving us a few bugs, but the audio and video quality did improve. The dark scenes have been fixed all is well...

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Posted by tree68 on Monday, August 31, 2020 8:59 PM

OK, some basics.

Tell your viewers where you are.  Marion, OH.  Make a nice title page.

Tell your viewers about the location.  Include some history - this junction was once used by the Pennsy, the Erie, and the Big Four, and by their successors.

Tell them about the lines - here you have the Sandusky District, Columbus Subdivision, Mt Victory Subdivision, and who knows what else.  Do your research.

Tell us about the facility - looks like there may be a viewing platform, the caboose, the tower.  Perhaps include scanner information for those who may be interested in visiting after they watch your video.  

Add a graphic showing the current trackage and who's who.

Take a scanner and listen to it.  Tap into the knowledge of other railfans who may be there.  Take notes.

When a train arrives, tell us about it:  "First to arrive for us was XYZ RR eastbound manifest 12X."  If you choose to include such info, ID the locos.  You can do that later, once you're home.

If you change locations, tell your viewers about it - ie, you moved from the viewing platform to trackside on the CSX tracks, f'rinstance.

And yes, I have done video production, as videographer, producer, and "talent."  I regularly work with our public TV station doing on-air camera work, both behind and in front of the camera.

You're getting a lot of helpful suggestions from everyone here.  Pay attention.  

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Posted by Convicted One on Monday, August 31, 2020 7:19 PM

You've got those two segments where the screen is just black for an extended period,  along with that  little blip at the end with the white CSX hoppers, for no apparent reason. Your production skills appear to be in decline.  Maybe it's time to  give up on the free demo of your video editing software, and buy the "shrink wrap" version?

I can watch trains anywhere, but I'd have to travel to that location to see the tower better. Perhaps you could have focused a greater share of your time to the location specific items, and given more attention to the inside of the tower?

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Posted by BaltACD on Monday, August 31, 2020 11:48 AM

Still need to make the productions pro in quality; not just in pronouncement.

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Posted by charlie hebdo on Monday, August 31, 2020 11:04 AM

zugmann

Oh boy, more youtube channel advertisments.  

I think we're all capable of going to youtube to look for train videos.  The constant spamming of the forum with them is getting old.  

Look - it'd be different if "prorailproducions" would actually participate in discussions - and not just drive by to peddle his wares. 

 

I agree.  Isn't advertising for commercial products (other than Kalmbach stuff)  strengst verboten? 

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Posted by zugmann on Monday, August 31, 2020 10:54 AM

Oh boy, more youtube channel advertisments.  

I think we're all capable of going to youtube to look for train videos.  The constant spamming of the forum with them is getting old.  

Look - it'd be different if "prorailproducions" would actually participate in discussions - and not just drive by to peddle his wares. 

It's been fun.  But it isn't much fun anymore.   Signing off for now. 


  

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Posted by tree68 on Sunday, August 30, 2020 10:54 PM

Still need captions, then there's that two minutes of blank screen...

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A Grand Day of Trains at Marion (2020) (HD)
Posted by ProRailProducions on Sunday, August 30, 2020 9:25 PM

A visit to one of the most iconic places in Ohio, Marion!

Link: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=rYzoy0Z-56A

We spend a Grand Day of Train Watching in Marion with many trains to be seen! Hope you all enjoy!

 

David

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